Feedback and Revisions

After reviewing our feedback from our class, we all decided to revise our film. One comment we received was that we executed our plot and genre well and was easily understood. They felt that our film was creepy and scary, which is what we are aiming for. Another comment we received, which we had a lot of, was our camera shots and angles were executed properly. Most of our feedback included the good use of our shots and angles, which we came to the conclusion to not change and keep all of our shots and angles the way they are. Other comments we received were about our music and location. The creepy and scary music we used when Patty was entering Ally's house created a creepy and suspenseful effect for the audience which is what we were going for. We also had comments about our location and how the audience could understand the sense of Ally's house (beautiful and spacious) and Patty's house (run-down, raggedy). Along with all of our positive feedback, we also received constructive criticism about things we should improve. Some negative feedback we received was to make our film more suspenseful and scary. In order to do this, my group and I decided to change the way Patty appears by changing her costume.